Once a year, the city allows people to stop auto traffic on
their streets for a few hours in the evening so the neighborhood can enjoy a
“block party”. In our neighborhood, everyone brings food and catches up with
people you live near but see less than you’d imagine. It brings a feeling of
community.
Inevitably there are people who violate the no-automobile rules.
On one occasion, it was nearing the end of a perfect Seattle summer evening
(warm, clear skies, and no rain), and all of the kids had gone to bed. Just a
few adults remained, picking up the last of the chairs and folding tables. Dusk
had fallen but the “Street Closed” signs remained in place at the ends of the
block.
Headlights swept across the street as a car turned the
corner at the end of the block. Normally, the driver sees the barricade (the
sign) and turns around. This time, the car slowly drove around one side of it
and approached us.
It was a large American car, circa 1973, and looked every
bit its age. The paint was sun damaged, and a long crack ran across the
windshield. As the car got closer, you could see that the car had no hubcaps
and that much of the rubber gasketing around the windows had disintegrated. You
could also see inside a small orange glow framed by the head of what appeared
to be a hard-living woman in her sixties. She was smoking with the windows up.
As she approached the remaining adults, one of my neighbors
who was putting away a card table scurried to the center of the street,
blocking the car’s path and holding up his hand. He set the table on edge in
front of him.
“Stop right there”, he said. “Didn’t you see the sign at the
end of the street?”
The car slowed but continued to advance towards him. The
driver began to slowly crank her window down and smoke poured out. However, she
said nothing.
This neighbor has a tendency to get keyed up if he senses a
rule is about to be violated, and this was no exception. He was itchin’ for a
scrap, and it looked like he was about to get it.
“Don’t you know that you are breaking the law?”, he said, a
little louder now, with a slight quaver in his voice (brought on not by fear
but the adrenaline surge of getting to do one of his favorite things). By this
time, the driver had rolled her window all the way down and cleared most of the
smoke from the car interior. She wore a pair of fifties-style glasses with
rhinestones and a reading-glasses chain to hang them around her generous
neck. She was within a foot of the table
when she brought the car to a complete halt.
For what felt like an eternity, everything stopped, with the
only sound the gentle rumble of the old car’s engine idling. The tension had
risen and you almost see the hair on the back of my neighbor’s neck stand.
Then, without warning, she spoke:
“Get out of the way!”, she rasped. “This is a street, you
moron!”
For a moment, my neighbor was speechless – didn’t he already
cover this in his opening remarks? Couldn’t she at least read his lips through
the smoke and the cracked windshield as he explained that it was she, not he,
who was in the wrong? He had the sign, he had the law, and he had the implicit
approval of the remaining adults, not to mention law-abiding citizens
everywhere.
“Did you not see the sign? Are you illiterate? Ignorance is
no excuse for the law!” His voice was rising now, and the ruckus was causing
lights to come on in previously dark homes. People appeared on their front
porches to observe the spectacle.
“This is stupid!”, she yelled, and revved the engine. She
then rolled, inch by inch, towards the table. The air now was so thick with
tension that you could cut it with a knife, and when she finally touched the
table the sound was so quiet so as to be anticlimactic.
“I’ve been hit!”, shouted my neighbor. Unimpressed, she
replied in a gravelly voice, “You’re pathetic. Don’t you have something better
to do?” She took a deep drag on her filterless mentholated cigarette and smoke
billowed out her window.
My neighbor limped to the curb with his card table yelling,
“I’m calling 911! You can’t just come over from Ballard and start breaking laws
in Magnolia! This is an outrage! I have your license plate number and I will
have you arrested for hit and run!”
Although he was slightly premature in his charge, she’d had
enough, and (sort of following his suggestion) was on the move. She slowly
proceeded to the other end of the block, and as she rounded the corner and
turned down the hill, she shook her fist out the window.
Yo soy Ricardo Diego, perra!
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ReplyDeleteAt least she didn't shoot him in the head!
DeleteGreat point, my Roman friend!
Delete@aBill What an interesting story! We’ve all met “that guy” before.
ReplyDeleteHear hear!
ReplyDeleteIt’s good, but I think there were opportunities to clarify what the street looked like. I mean, was it straight or did it have a curve in it? And was the neighbor a lawyer?
ReplyDeleteMeh... You need to work on your writing. You’ve got a split infinitive in the text, for God’s sake
ReplyDeleteThis story was much better than CATS, I would read it again and again.
ReplyDeleteThat's great news! I am hoping that the stage adaptation will be popular for at least 19 years.
Delete@Tony Clifton Nobody’s perfect, and if you hadn’t mentioned it no one else would have noticed.
ReplyDeleteOh please – and commas go inside the quotes
Delete@Tony Clifton There is no reason to be disrespectful . Good job, aBill.
DeleteWow, what a lot of controversy!
ReplyDeleteNeedless controversy.
DeleteIt’s so… Unprofessional. And that bit about the knife is cliche
ReplyDelete@Tony Clifton I’m going to borrow something from aBill and call you out: you’re pathetic! You couldn’t do anything half as good as this.
DeleteClifton, you sound like a Cowboys fan.
DeleteHow would you know "doctor"
Delete@Tony Clifton I was an English major in college - I think I know. And on top of that, you keep forgetting to end your posts with periods.
DeleteYou idiots don't know a thing about grammar!
DeleteWe've been waiting for you, Professor Chomsky!
DeleteIf they built a car that ran on the situational irony of rich and poor, educated and uneducated, yours would go far. How about a story about your selfless contribution to those in need.
ReplyDeleteThanks baldanza! Any other requests?
DeleteLet's see a writing sample from the good "doctor"
DeleteI am open to guest posting - DrLaura, would you be willing to post some of your work?
DeleteI'm all in for having the Doc write something for you! maybe it will have a better ending
Delete@ Tony Clifton I will on the condition that you provide one of yours - and I expect zero grammatical errors.
DeleteGreat to see that your still creating controversy everywhere you go Bill. Even a split infinitive here and there. Hey, as far as I'm concerned any grammatical errors here are Bush's fault.
ReplyDeleteTalking of which that character driving the vehicle seems familiar are you sure that wasn't me?
OMG - I'd never thought about that before! When's your 70th and are you still smoking clove cigarettes?
ReplyDeleteWell sonny it's not polite to ask what an olden is smoking now is it?
DeleteCrazy old grannies! You leave so many open endings that it pisses me off!@#$#!#!@#
ReplyDeleteSo the little old lady is the hero, right?
ReplyDeleteI believe DerLlama would heartily concur if I'd substituted "clove" for "mentholated".
DeleteSo Ballard has invaded Magnolia? Oh the humanity!
ReplyDeleteAs my friend Walter said, they are all nihilists in Ballard.
DeleteThe horror!
ReplyDeleteI'll be the judge of that, Kurtz.
DeletePTL nobody got really hurt here, and a little warning about the "covet thy neighbor" thing going on here
ReplyDelete김정일이 북한에서 사랑함께 보낸다.
ReplyDelete- with love from Democratic Republic of Korea
I am not sure that I am supposed to be on this blog. I think I might have been the driver in this story. What is a table doing in the road anyway?
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